The setting of the story was at the beach. It was during the holiday..
The protagonist in this story is Jerry a 11 year old English boy. Jerry was a good swimmer. He is his mothers only child. He was a person who liked taking risk. He was having self training of how to breathe for a long time under the water, because he wanted to succeed in passing through the tunnel.
Jerry loved swimming and in fact he was a good swimmer. During the holiday Jerry met a group of guys while he was swimming at the wild beach. He one day followed those boys in the dark ocean where they were crossing a huge rock through an unknown tunnel. As from that day he became obsess with finding out the entrance of the tunnel, because it also took them a lot of time to cross the so called wall, for a moment he thought that the guys have drown. Each and every morning he went there hoping to find the entrance of the tunnel, because he was trying so hard to hold his breath for a long time under the ocean his nose started bleeding every morning. Nevertheless he one day realize that he was taking chances with his life and decided to postpone the trying to the next holiday. The last time he tried he almost died, because his nose was bleeding and his goggles was filled with blood and he couldn't see. At last he was at the other side of the so called wall when he opened his eyes...
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